[Inaaca]

A third page, finally!

This page was pretty scenery-heavy, so it took a bit of doing.

Much apologies for the heavy delay on this one. A combination of post-semester burnout and various events were the culprit. The next page is already well on its way though! I'm playing a bit of catchup.

Enjoy, and let me know what you think!

[Eorzea]

Good job, Inaaca!

Is that girl in the second frame irritated by you? Haha.

I think the last two panels are my favorites. The library books all look so colorful; I really like it. And the lighting in the last frame is great! The Roegadyn may be a tad short, but it doesn't matter. I love that you're drinking a beer. I didn't realize that was on the menu in Eorzea!

[Val]

I love it =D I love your style, inaaca, as well as the colours you use. My favourite would have to be that beautiful first panel and the dramatic last panel!

Is that mage in the purple a really tall Lalafell? xD I love that you're a little tarutaru~ cute =]

I'm looking forward to page 4!

[Eorzea]

Not a tall Lalafell, just a normal Lalafell. Inaaca is still just a Tarutaru, after all! He needs some kneecaps.

[Anera]

I personally love the clouds in the first panel. XD
The lighting in the last panel is awesome.

[Galactimus]

This chapter was very creative. I like how you go from scene to scene showing how the new races are the same yet slightly different. In his eyes he see's a Mithra with orange hair and an orange tail, a large Tarutaru, and a Galka without a tail. The last frame is my favorite. "I just can't put my finger on it" while staring at a Galka with his tail cut off.

9.7 / 10
Incredible.

Would have been a perfect 10 if the "Hume" or "Elvaan" had dark skin. (^_^)v

This post has been edited by Galactimus: Jul 18, 2010 - 7:47 AM

[Kurisu]

Good work, Inaaca!

The last panel is definitely my favourite*. The glow of the aetheryte crystals, the aura it gives off; it looks fantastic!

*Although the 5th panel is my favourite, a;; of them are amazing!

[Inaaca]

Eorzea, on Jul 17, 2010 - 5:59 PM, said:

Good job, Inaaca!

Is that girl in the second frame irritated by you? Haha.

I think the last two panels are my favorites. The library books all look so colorful; I really like it. And the lighting in the last frame is great! The Roegadyn may be a tad short, but it doesn't matter. I love that you're drinking a beer. I didn't realize that was on the menu in Eorzea!

Thanks a lot.

I think she's annoyed by the fact that I'm distracting her man from her and whatever they were doing. Also, in MY Eorzea, all pubs have beer on the menu.

Val, on Jul 17, 2010 - 6:13 PM, said:

I love it =D I love your style, inaaca, as well as the colours you use. My favourite would have to be that beautiful first panel and the dramatic last panel!

Is that mage in the purple a really tall Lalafell? xD I love that you're a little tarutaru~ cute =]

I'm looking forward to page 4!

Eorzea, on Jul 17, 2010 - 6:32 PM, said:

Not a tall Lalafell, just a normal Lalafell. Inaaca is still just a Tarutaru, after all! He needs some kneecaps.

Thank you. I think I agree with your panel favorites, too.

Yeah, Inaaca a stubby Tarutaru compared to the taller Lalafell. It's worth noting too, that Inaaca is a "large" sized Tarutaru back in Vanadiel. :`

Galactimus, on Jul 18, 2010 - 7:46 AM, said:

This chapter was very creative. I like how you go from scene to scene showing how the new races are the same yet slightly different. In his eyes he see's a Mithra with orange hair and an orange tail, a large Tarutaru, and a Galka without a tail. The last frame is my favorite. "I just can't put my finger on it" while staring at a Galka with his tail cut off.

9.7 / 10
Incredible.

Would have been a perfect 10 if the "Hume" or "Elvaan" had dark skin. ()v

I'm glad you picked up on that theme. The comic will delve more into the contrasts with the coming pages, too.

I should note, though, that the familiar Elezen and Hyur pairing were intentionally normal looking. Firstly because they are the races that most resemble their Vanadiel counterparts, and secondly so Inaaca had a familiar foundation to ground himself and establish a comparative contrast. Thus the narrative line that panel is paired with "Eorzea feels very familiar..."

Anera, on Jul 17, 2010 - 9:01 PM, said:

I personally love the clouds in the first panel. XD
The lighting in the last panel is awesome.

Kurisu, on Jul 18, 2010 - 8:36 AM, said:

Good work, Inaaca!

The last panel is definitely my favourite*. The glow of the aetheryte crystals, the aura it gives off; it looks fantastic!

*Although the 5th panel is my favourite, a;; of them are amazing!

Thank you very much. The last panel seems to be a popular favorite. With good reason, I suppose. All of the panels were certainly challenging in their own right. Lots of different scenic details.

[Siali]

Yay! I love these, the last picture feels so warm and yet not with the soft blue crystal glow. I think my favorite is the first one, it feels very wispy and the clouds I expect to move at any second. And you've got me on suspense now, hope we see the next one soon.

[Inaaca]

Barring life getting in the way, the next page should be coming fairly quickly compared to the other pages.

The suspense has only just begun building.

[Momotaru]

Very colorful, and great lighting in the last panel!
.. Wow, those books must have been a pain in the arse.

But I wonder.. what could be off.. Hm..

Spoiler

could it be the Roegadyn is missing a tail? Yes, that`s it, isn`t it!

.. or maybe that`s not it. XD


Looking forward to the next chapter!

[munjahaidate]

Awesome.